A Dying Wish

Waiting for the promised light after a broken night

How foolish was I to believe it to be right

Fighting for the last breath of hope

Wishing to relive the times I’d Lost

For the Daily Prompt # 26 atย https://aprompteachday.wordpress.com/2015/06/26/prompt-26-in-a-flash-2/

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9 thoughts on “A Dying Wish”

  1. Interesting. Yours could almost be a response to mine. In mine I’m all “Hey – night can’t go on forever! You’ll get your happy, sunny day soon! In the meantime – here’s this torch!” whereas this could be you responding with “You lied! The new day isn’t coming and the torch was broken!” ๐Ÿ˜‰

    I find it hard to judge super short poems but I like this one anyway. Oh – and if ever you are going through tough times and would like a chat – or would just like a chat anyway – remember that you can message me via Contact the Author on my site or the Facebook page attached to my site. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Lolzz…… recently I have been so busy with work that I couldn’t write anything or checked anyone else’s work either, I thought the same thing after reading yours……and I was like totally laughing at the coincidence….

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